The graph below shows in percentage terms the changing patterns of domestic access to modern technology in homes in the UK
The given line graph shows us, in mobile
percentage
, how changed patterns of domestic access to modern technology, in homes in the United Kingdom, in a period from 1996 to 2003.
Process the graph , we are comparing 4 gizmos and as we can clearly see the CD
player
have
the biggest Correct subject-verb agreement
has
percentage
, over 80 then
others.
As can be seen in the graph, in 1996 -1997Correct article usage
the
phone
in the United KingdomFix the agreement mistake
phones
was
about a little bit lower 20 Correct subject-verb agreement
were
percentage
. Replace the word
per cent
While
CD
player
was almost in
three times larger, about 60 Change preposition
apply
percentage
. Over the period 1996 to 2003Replace the word
per cent
Correct your spelling
CD
Cd
Fix the agreement mistake
players
player
rise
steadily, at the same time Wrong verb form
rose
mobile
Correct article usage
the mobile
phone
fluctuated slightly, sometimes livelier off, Fix the agreement mistake
phones
although
the trend was upward.
It could be notices
that home Change the verb form
be noticed
computes
have Correct your spelling
computers
similar
trend with Correct article usage
a similar
CD
player
, Fix the agreement mistake
players
although
it happening
about 25 - 60 Wrong verb form
happens
percentage
. Replace the word
per cent
The
period between 1998 and 2003 Internet access suddenly appeared and climbed sharply.Change preposition
In the
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "although".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, cd, player with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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