The line graph shows the average number of people attending top-level football matches in three European countries from 1980 to 2004.

The line graph shows the average number of people attending top-level football matches in three European countries from 1980 to 2004.
The provided line graph compares three different countries, namely Italy, England and Germany in terms of annual attendance per top-level football match in five different years from 1980 to 2004.The units are measured in thousands of numbers.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that Italy decreased noticeably,
whereas
two European countries- England and Germany touched their highest point. In 1980 Italy was the country with an overwhelming number of fans- 35 thousand, afterwards the country reached its peak in 1986.
Subsequently
, over a period of six years from 1986 to 1992 took a nosedive.
Consequently
, reached the bottom point in 2004. With regards to European countries and the number of participants in soccer matches- Germany’s soccer attendance was 25 thousand individuals in 1980, comprised a downward tendency until 1986.
However
,
from
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in
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1986 attendance of German football fans reached the vertex of
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a
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thousand inhabitants.
On the other hand
, England was at the same point as Germany in 1980 but
nevertheless
, after 24 years,
this
tendency reached its peak.
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