The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The bar chart illustrates information about the
percentage
of illiterate rates by region and by gender in the past.
In general, both the illiteracy
of women
and men number tended to increase significantly,
but resulted in a higher rate in the Remove the comma
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percentage
of women
illiterate while
an increase was seen in the information for men.
In developed countries
, East Asia
and Oceania, the percentage
of female illiterate in this
time frame were slightly lower at 1 per cent
and 8 per cent
. In Latin American, Caribbean and Arab States, around 10 per cent
to 28 per cent
of men were illiterate in the last
year. In both Sub-Saharan Africa and South Asia
, respectively approximately half and around 56 per cent
of ignorant from man, making them the highest compared to those remaining countries
.
In terms of the percentage
of women
illiterate at the same time living in Latin America and the Caribbean was 12 per cent
, developed countries
had the lowest among other countries
3 per cent
of illiteracy
females. The rate was slightly lower for East Asia
and Oceania with 20 percent while
around 48 percent of Sub-Saharan Africa had untrained women
. Finally
, the percentage
of uneducated women
in the Arab States and South Asia
was the highest with respectively 52 per cent
and 58 per cent
at the same time.
Thanks to the increases in the percentage
of illiteracy
rates had many fluctuations, we can see clearly that the percentage
of illiteracy
man always higher than women
and the massive increase of untrained females was impressive from different countries
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