The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The bar chart illustrates information about the
percentage
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of illiterate rates by region and by gender in the past. In general, both the
illiteracy
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of
women
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and men number tended to increase significantly
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but resulted in a higher rate in the
percentage
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of
women
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illiterate
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an increase was seen in the information for men. In developed
countries
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, East
Asia
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and Oceania, the
percentage
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of female illiterate in
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time frame were slightly lower at 1 per
cent
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and 8 per
cent
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. In Latin American, Caribbean and Arab States, around 10 per
cent
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to 28 per
cent
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of men were illiterate in the
last
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year. In both Sub-Saharan Africa and South
Asia
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, respectively approximately half and around 56 per
cent
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of ignorant from man, making them the highest compared to those remaining
countries
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. In terms of the
percentage
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of
women
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illiterate at the same time living in Latin America and the Caribbean was 12 per
cent
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, developed
countries
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had the lowest among other
countries
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3 per
cent
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of
illiteracy
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females. The rate was slightly lower for East
Asia
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and Oceania with 20 percent
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around 48 percent of Sub-Saharan Africa had untrained
women
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.
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, the
percentage
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of uneducated
women
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in the Arab States and South
Asia
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was the highest with respectively 52 per
cent
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and 58 per
cent
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at the same time. Thanks to the increases in the
percentage
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of
illiteracy
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rates had many fluctuations, we can see clearly that the
percentage
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of
illiteracy
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man always higher than
women
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and the massive increase of untrained females was impressive from different
countries
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, illiteracy, women, countries, asia, cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 7 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Illiteracy rates
  • Region
  • Gender disparity
  • Bar chart
  • Estimated
  • Summarise
  • Main features
  • Comparisons
  • Analyzing
  • Discrepancies
  • Significant
  • Pronounced
  • Speculation
  • Male
  • Female
  • Global perspective
  • Literacy
  • Educational attainment
  • Socio-economic factors
  • Cultural influences
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