You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The line chart compares the
rase
production of oil in the United Kingdom over a period of 19 years.
Correct your spelling
rapid
Overall
, we can see that in this
period of time , output
of petroleum was the highest . Add an article
the output
However
, the drop-off a
natural gas Correct your spelling
of
extreamly
grew and almost reached Correct your spelling
extremely
the
petroleum’s results.
Correct article usage
apply
To begin
, in 1981 the petroleum manifacture
increased Correct your spelling
manufacture
fron
9 Correct your spelling
from
energy
units
to 140 energy
units
,
and had been stable for Remove the comma
apply
fibe
years. But , the Correct your spelling
few
energy
units
were
declined back to the starting point and extremely fast Unnecessary verb
apply
arrive
Wrong verb form
arrived
to
the maximum in Change preposition
at
the
2000. Change the article
apply
As well as
, the natural gas increased rapidly from 40 Rephrase
Also
till
100 Change preposition
to
energy
units
; in 1981 the production showed the best arrangement, after which it growth
.
Regarding Replace the word
grew
to
other fuel, Remove the preposition
apply
the
coal’s Correct article usage
apply
energy
units
in 1981 were 80 and extremely go
down near to 1986 and got 30 Wrong verb form
went
energy
units
. At
the end ,the final Change the preposition
In
energy
from one million tonnes of coal became around the
30.Correct article usage
apply
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, units with synonyms.
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