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The chart below gives information about Southland\'s main exports in 2000, *20.., and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below gives information about Southland\'s main exports in 2000, *20.., and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The illustrated bar chart depicts the main exports for future prediction in 2025 based on data from 2000 vs
present
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 year in the Southland.
Overall
, the main exports revolve around 3 major things listed
as
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meat
products
, Dairy
products
, and International tourism. upon a closer perspective, all three
department
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departments
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 of main export show different
trend
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trends
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 where international tourism is predicted with an upward
trend
 reaching over £10
billion
 in 2025 from 8
billion
pounds
 in 2000.
Upnext
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Next
,
the
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apply
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Dairy
products
 with a depreciating
trend
 after reaching
peak
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a peak
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 in 2022 at 10
billion
pound
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pounds
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 worth of
export
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exports
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 after beginning
in
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at
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 7
billion
pounds
 back in 2000 with
a
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an
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 average prediction to reach above 9
billion
pounds
. Leaving meat
products
 in the
last
 which observed with a continuous declining
trend
 at peak in 2000 at 6
billion
pounds
 that came down to 5
billion
pound
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pounds
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.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words products, trend, billion, pounds with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 4 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • exports
  • trends
  • projections
  • comparisons
  • dairy products
  • meat products
  • international tourism
  • significant growth
  • decline
  • export values
  • overview
  • highlight
  • sectors
  • future projections
  • data analysis
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