The chart below gives information about Southland\'s main exports in 2000, *20.., and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The illustrated bar chart depicts the main exports for future prediction in 2025 based on data from 2000 vs
present
year in the Southland.
Correct article usage
the present
Overall
, the main exports revolve around 3 major things listed as
meat Change preposition
apply
products
, Dairy products
, and International tourism.
upon a closer perspective, all three department
of main export show different Change to a plural noun
departments
trend
where international tourism is predicted with an upward Fix the agreement mistake
trends
trend
reaching over £10 billion
in 2025 from 8 billion
pounds
in 2000. Upnext
, Correct your spelling
Next
the
Dairy Correct article usage
apply
products
with a depreciating trend
after reaching peak
in 2022 at 10 Add an article
a peak
billion
pound
worth of Fix the agreement mistake
pounds
export
after beginning Fix the agreement mistake
exports
in
7 Change preposition
at
billion
pounds
back in 2000 with a
average prediction to reach above 9 Change the article
an
billion
pounds
. Leaving meat products
in the last
which observed with a continuous declining trend
at peak in 2000 at 6 billion
pounds
that came down to 5 billion
pound
.Change to a plural noun
pounds
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words products, trend, billion, pounds with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 4 times.
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