The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in European country between 1979 and 2004.
The line graph shows the consumption of
fish
and meat
in an unknown European country in grams
per week
per capita. The data was recorded every five years from 1979 till 2004
Overall
, there is a progressive
downward trend in three types of meat
, with chicken
being the only meat
with an upward trend in consumption throughout the period.
Focusing on descending figures, fish
demonstrated a gradual decrease from just above 50 grams
per week
to 40 grams
; however
, fish
was the most unpopular option at the beginning and remained placing the bottom. Next, starting from 150 grams
per week
, lamb suffered a rapid decrease finishing with the starting amount of fish
. Beef, in fact, experienced a dive at the beginning, but recovered to the mark of 240 grams
per week
, then
in 1989, the sharpest decline happened, and continued until the rate of 100 grams
per week
.
Turning to the ascending one, the chicken
fluctuated slightly during the whole time. Moreover
, by 1994, it had already doubled in size, reaching 220 grams
per week
. From 1994 to 1999 no significant changes were shown, whereas
by 2004, the trend of chicken
started to moderately grow. Finally
, in 2004 chicken
ended as the most popular type of meat
among the other three options.Submitted by Umar on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words fish, meat, grams, week, chicken with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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