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The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The diagram illustrates the
information
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 on how to gather
information
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 on the weather conditions to produce reliable forecasts, measured per minute in the Australia Bureau of Meteorology.
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, there are 4 main steps in collecting
information
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 on weather circumstances to support spreading forecast news, from incoming
information
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 to broadcasting the
information
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 to the public.
According to
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 the picture, the initial
information
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are coming
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comes
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 from several sources,
such
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 as satellites,
radar
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, and drifting buoys. For the
information
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that is
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 coming from the
radar
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, the
information
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 will appear on the
radar
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 screen and synoptic chart.
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Likewise
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 the data from
radar
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,
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 and the
information
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 from the buoy will be seen in the synoptic chart as well,
whereas
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 the
information
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 which comes from the satellite will be shown on the
radar
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 screen and
also
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 in satellite pictures. All the data that have been collected and analysed,
furthermore
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, they will be inputted into the computer for news preparation. After being ready, the
information
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 will be broadcast through TV, radio, and recorded announcements.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words information, radar with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 11 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Meteorology
  • Accurate weather forecasts
  • Satellite images
  • Radar
  • Drifting buoys
  • Central forecasting office
  • Dedicated communication channels
  • Analyzed and interpreted
  • Meteorologists
  • Advanced computer models
  • Weather predictions
  • Distributed
  • General public and specific stakeholders
  • Television, radio, internet
  • Continuous updates
  • Ever-changing nature
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