The bar chart illustrates the percentage of how parents in a country spent time taking care of their children in the evening in 2022. (rerewrite)
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of
time
that Use synonyms
mothers
, fathers, and Use synonyms
both
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parents
together spent on various evening Use synonyms
activities
with their children in a certain country in 2022.
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Overall
, it is evident that Linking Words
mothers
spent the most Use synonyms
time
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on
dressing and helping with Change preposition
apply
homework
, Use synonyms
while
fathers contributed the least to these Linking Words
activities
. Use synonyms
In contrast
, playing games and preparing for bed were Linking Words
activities
where Use synonyms
both
Use synonyms
parents
were more equally involved, though Use synonyms
mothers
still played a predominant role.
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To begin
with, Linking Words
mothers
dedicated the highest percentage of their Use synonyms
time
to dressing their children, Use synonyms
with
around 75%, followed by assisting with Change preposition
at
homework
at 50%Use synonyms
,
and preparing for bed at 42%. Fathers, Remove the comma
apply
on the other hand
, contributed the least amount of Linking Words
time
, with their involvement peaking at 10% for helping with Use synonyms
homework
. Their participation in playing games and preparing for bed was even lower, at approximately 5% each, Use synonyms
while
they spent almost no Linking Words
time
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on
dressing, at just 2%.
When Change preposition
apply
both
Use synonyms
parents
participated together, the most Use synonyms
time
was spent playing games, Use synonyms
with
70%, and preparing for bed, Change preposition
at
with
50%. Change preposition
at
However
, their combined efforts were less prominent in Linking Words
homework
and dressing, at 38% and 22%, respectively.
In summary, Use synonyms
mothers
were the primary caregivers during the evening, particularly in educational and preparatory Use synonyms
activities
. Fathers’ involvement was minimal across all Use synonyms
activities
, Use synonyms
while
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both
Use synonyms
parents
were more equally involved in recreational and bedtime routines.Use synonyms
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