The line graph illustrates the amount of visitor spend for visitors to New Zealand from 5 countries over a period of eighteen years between 1996 and 2014.
The graph shows the amount of visitor spend for
visitors
to New Zealand from Australia, USA, UK, Japan and China in eighteen years from 1996 to 2014.
To begin
with, it is clear almost all the lines have an increasing trend. Australia has the biggest fluctuation compared to the other four and then
end
up Wrong verb form
ended
2000
expenditure in 2014 which means it Change preposition
with 2000
have
about 1000 Wrong verb form
had
visitors
higher in 1996, Australia in 2006 it's the peak and had 2500 expenditure. On the other hand
, china in 2014 had the lowest expenditure in all years except between 2001 and 2005. However
, china
had 400 Capitalize word
China
visitors
in 2014.
Moreover
, USA and UK have
800 and 450 visitor spend respectively but both increased to 1200 and 850 visitor spend. Japan is the only one which has the approximately same amount (500) Wrong verb form
had
visitors
at the beginning and Change preposition
of visitors
at the end
of the line graph.Submitted by amir.lajevardi84 on
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