You should spend about 20 minutes on this task The pie charts show the results of a survey conducted by a university on the opinions of full-time and part-time students about its services. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task

The pie charts show the results of a survey conducted by a university on the opinions of full-time and part-time students about its services.

Write at least 150 words.
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The presented pie charts compare data from the survey that one university did about students' view of
work
in both situation and their facilities.
Overall
, It was important that people who spent all their time on
work
had more satisfaction from IT support
instead
from another one ;
moreover
, both groups believed that their hours of
work
were perfect.
According to
the IT support diagrams, nearly half of the people who
work
full-time thought it was very good
also
, roughly a third of them chose Quite;
however
, 13% of them selected Not at all.
In contrast
, the proportion of part-time workers was 10% less than the main percentage in the
last
one chose not at all;
additionally
, 35% and 20% respectively were for Quite and Very. The working hours graphs illustrate both communities had a major proportion of Very, but part-time had more number;
then
they were Quit by 32% and 23% for full and part-time;
furthermore
, for Not at all a tiny number was for full and 5% was for part-time.
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