AI art repersents a groundbreaking leap in artistic innovation, pushing the boundaries and challenging the conventional notions of human artistic expression – a threat to the essence of art. Discuss both views and give your opinion.[819]

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With the ongoing cultivation of AI in the

art

industry comes a pertinent question of whether the utilization of AI in creative spaces should be continued. Some advocate that AI

art

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a groundbreaking leap

artistic

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innocation

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innovation

and

push

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the boundaries. Others,

however

doubts

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this

statement as they claim that AI

art

poses a threat to the conventional notions of human artistic expression. From my perspective, the latter is clearly more convincing and in what follows, I will provide relevant evidence and reasoning to

further

substantiate

this

stance. Optimists point out that we are making considerable headway with the rapid advancement in the sophistication of AI.

While

some may laugh

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the idea that AI is refined enough to replace

human

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when it sometimes responds to questions with complete nonsense, it is already providing

human

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with many obstacles in various industries, and

art

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no exception. Indeed, with just a simple command and a click of a button, AI can create a visual of any kind right in front of our eyes, and transform it into a work of

art

. Avowedly,

this

view is valid, but only to some extent. The aforementioned practice brings about concerns

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plagiarism. With the case of Stable Diffusion, people are

acknowleging

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acknowledging

the fact that the dataset, whose purpose is to train the AI, contains artworks by artists and they are utilizing these without giving the artists proper credit or compensation. Plus the lack of options for individuals to remove photos in the database and there is, technically, no “

papertrail

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paper trail

that allows us to fast-check an assertion”, as Steven Pinker has stated in her interview with Alvin Powell,

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creates a serious problem of AI

art

competitors potentially “cheating”, taking advantage of AI.

On the other hand

while

the convenience and pre-eminence of AI are clearly

demomstrated

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, it

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not doing the creative things that conventional

art

are

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. As Moshe Safdie stated : “Intelligence assumes a certain independence and consciousness, which I do not think AI has right now”.

Although

AI can imitate things that are already known and regurgitate them in another format,

that is

not an original work.

While

these generators will distort artworks to a certain standard, human artists can provide their service to everyone without any discrimination and can truly capture all the qualities that make an individual unique and beautiful,

instead

of washing

then

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away or turning them into a different being. These are what make traditional

art

have an advantage over AI

art

. To reiterate, the problem of AI

art

is yet to be solved, but with the right treatments and measures, AI could potentially become our collaborator and deliver new possibilities. But for now, people should be

awae

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aware

of the immense consequences AI brings.

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The essay provides a clear opinion that AI art poses a threat to the essence of art.

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Good structure with an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion, making it easier to follow the argument.

Task achievement

Attempts to present both sides of the argument before giving a personal opinion, which is commendable for a balanced perspective.

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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
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Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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AI art repersents a groundbreaking leap in artistic innovation, pushing the boundaries and challenging the conventional notions of human artistic expression – a threat to the essence of art. Discuss both views and give your opinion.[819]

Include an introduction and conclusion

Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion.

Some people say that governments should pay for public health care and education, while others say that it is not governments’ responsibility. Please discuss both views and give your opinion.