the chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.
The given chart provides information about the average amount used up for a week by families in the country from 1968 to 2018. It includes eight distinct items.
Overall
, it's obvious from the chart that, food generally enhanced Linking Words
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the rest of the other expenses were decreased over the given trend.Linking Words
In contrast
, the charges of fuel and power represented the lowest rate in 1968 and 2018.
In 1968, people paid for food more than one-third of their income. Linking Words
Additionally
, 10% of money is spent on both Housing and clothes. Linking Words
By comparison
, towards leisure and housing about 22% priority is given by individuals, Linking Words
also
19% and just over 15% .
Among the other essentials, transportation was given approximately 14% in 2018 and nearly 8% in 1968. Expenses on clothing, fuel and personal goods remained less than or equal to 5% in 2018. Linking Words
Whereas
in 1968 the earnings spent on personal goods and leisure were almost the same. The average spending on household products remained the same almost 7% in double years. Fuel tool approximately 6% in 1968.Linking Words
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