In
this
day and age, science is deemed to be the greatest collective
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in light of the advantages it has brought forth for
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humanity. For some people, scientific research should only focus on solving world
health
problems
,
while
others hold the opinion that there are more important issues. From my perspective, I
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the latter opinion.
On the one hand, it’s true
health
problems
worldwide are bones of contention
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to be tackled. If not addressed timely, those
problems
can have adverse impacts on people’s well-being and mentality, on a wider scale, it can even be pandemics or epidemics.
Moreover
,
health
sciences
also
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conditions. It contributes to ensuring a longer and healthier life, monitors our
health
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us
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diets,
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bodies,….which leads to not only better physical
health
but
also
relaxing mental conditions.
Therefore
, without
health
sciences, our
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quality would deteriorate, there would be
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trend in life expectancies, more possibilities of
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or epidemic in light of the lack of medicine. No cure for terminal illness in the future,….
For example
, the Covid-19 pandemic
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has posed dire threats to people’s physical and mental well-being and finances. Without the timely arrival of vaccines, it would have been as deadly as previous plagues in history,
such
as the Black Death or the Spanish Flu.
On the other hand
, only
health
care is not enough to cater for humanity, our
lives
are composed of a large scale of other factors. First and foremost, there are other
problems
that play havoc with human
lives
other than
health
problems
. Indeed, a wide range of
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pressing issues on Earth, and
health
problems
are just small parts of the whole, some can even downgrade
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humanity on a wider scale. Take
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as an example, there are many types of
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, each
our
lives
in different ways. Air
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of heart disease, wheezing, coughing,
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respiratory
problems
and skin, nose, and throat irritation, which are
health
problems
needing to be tackled. Another problem is famine which
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in malnutrition, starvation, disease, and high death rates.
Moreover
, human
lives
also
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social facets,
such
as communications and education. Those aspects are made easier, more convenient and more comprehensive thanks to technological inventions.
All things considered,
while
health
problems
pose great risks to
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well-being, scientific research should not be solely conducted to solve them alone but should rather be directed towards other pressing matters as well.