The table shows the worldwide market share of the mobile phone market for manufacturers in the years 2005 and 2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, make comparisons where relevant.
The illustration below shows the international
market
share
of different mobile phones for manufacturers
in the years 2005 and 2006.
Overall
, Nokia dominated the largest percentage
in both consecutive years from 2005 and 2006. While
some combined other phone manufacturers
got the second highest percentage
in the year
2005, it declined to third in rank in the year
2006. The third biggest in sales in the year
2005 was Motorola. Motorola soared even higher, as the second largest market
share
in the year
2006. However
mobile manufacturers
like Samsung, Sony Ericsson, LG and BenQ Mobile remained the least percentage
on
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of
market
share
.
The most dominant in the year
2005 was Nokia as it had a 32.5% market
share
. Moreover
, it maintained its dominance by the following year
(2006) with a 35% market
share
. It was followed by combined other mobile manufacturers
by 19.2% recorded in the year
2005. While
other phone companies ranked second in the year
2005, it dropped to 16.2% in the year
2006. However
, Motorola which ranked third on
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in
year
2005 with 17.7% of the market
share
, rose higher in the following year
(2006) with 21.1%.
On the other hand
, Samsung got the fourth spot on the biggest market
share
in 2005 with a 12.7% recorded percentage
. But during the year
2006 Samsung’s market
share
dropped to 11.8%. While
other phone companies like Sony Ericsson, LG, and BenQ Mobile got the least market
share
for both years of 2005 to 2006 with only 2.4% to 7.4% range of market
share
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