The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in оnе country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The chart below gives information about closed and opened shops in one nation from 2011 to 2018.
Overall
, in 2011, the rate of openings was the highest; Linking Words
however
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at the end
of the period, Linking Words
this
trend considerably declined to the lowest point. The closures of the market were hum and haw but remained steady Linking Words
at the end
of the period.
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To begin
with, the standard level of openings was, in 2011, approximately 8,500. Linking Words
Nonetheless
, in the upcoming year, Linking Words
this
quantification will decrease slowly to under 4000. After 2 years, Linking Words
this
trend enhanced to a consistent level. Between 2015 and 2017, rates were almost the same. Ultimately, openings face the lowest point of 3000 in 2018.
By 2011, closed markets were under $6500. After some alterations, in 2013, Linking Words
this
trend reached a peak of nearly 7,000, and people prefer to close their careers. In 2014, these statistics decreased to 6500. Linking Words
As a consequence
, in 2015, the count of traders that stopped their company was below the standard rate, which is below 1000. Linking Words
Nonetheless
, the attitude toward closures soared sustainably in 2016 and remained unchangeable until 2018.Linking Words
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