Some people think that sports involving violence such as boxing and martial arts should be banned from TV as well as from international sports competition. what is your opinion?

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, that a lot of

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types

of fight tournaments are

broadcasted

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worldwide. I agree with the

possition

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position

that

this

content should be banned from

TV

and,

moreover

, excluded from international sports competitions.

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people

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in their lives could be considered as the reason why

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should not

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martial arts.

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and actions of other

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since our appearance.

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aggressive

behavior and could act exactly the same in society.

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, if boxing and other similar sports types

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prohibited on

TV

and

competitions

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in competitions

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,

people

with

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would not watch

it

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.

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, the energy, that viewers

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spends

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on watching violent

turnaments

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tournaments

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self-development. It is hard to deny, that

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watching

fights consume

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of energy from

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the viewer

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spectacular in process of a fight.

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, an individual may give up his personal goals, which demand significant

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and time from him.

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all of that may be postponed because

people

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addicted

from

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watching fights. In conclusion, I would stick

on

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my opinion that violent types of sport should be prohibited on

TV

and

on

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in

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serious competitions because

this

content may deteriorate an unmatured mind and create a

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threat

that

for

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society.

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, the consuming of

such

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information may negatively

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on

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achieving

individuals

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goals.