The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart provides information about closures and openings in one nation in years between 2011 and 2018.
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, statistics for opening a new market were the highest in 2011, but Linking Words
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trend faced the lowest point of it. Closures of the market fluctuated, but in the end, remained steady.
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To begin
, the maximum amount of openings was in 2011 approximately 8.500. Linking Words
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, in the following year, Linking Words
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measurement decreased gradually to slightly under 4000. In the next 2 years, Linking Words
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trend increased at a consistent rate. Between 2015 and 2017, rates were roughly equal to each other. Linking Words
Finally
, measurements face the lowest point of 3000 in 2018.
Closing a business was under 6500 in 2011. After some fluctuations, in 2013, Linking Words
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rate reached its peak approximately 7000 entrepreneurs decided to close their businesses. In 2014, these stats decreased to 6500. Linking Words
Consequently
, in 2015, the number of businessfolks that decided to stop their firm was the minimal level which is under 1000. Linking Words
However
, the attitude toward closing the organization soared sharply in 2016 and remained steady until 2018.Linking Words
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