The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by local authorities in Someland in 1980, 1990 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by local authorities in Someland in 1980, 1990 and 2000.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie graphs illustrate the shift in yearly spending by local government in Someland in the
years
1980, 1990 and 2000.
Overall
, it is clear from the pies that higher education was a
point
for each
year
,
while
spendings
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for other stuffs were the lowest. In 1980, the percentage of high education was the main feature at 35% and
this
aspect was 40% in 2000, and
maximum
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the maximum
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point
took
year
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the year
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1990 with 45%.
Moreover
,
transpartation
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transportation
transplantation
was the less significant feature in 2000 and
have
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had
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just above 20%.
This
aspect was in third place in 1980 and took 16% and in 1990 it had very little proportion at 6%. Environment
sevices
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services
had
his
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their
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peak
point
at about 10%, but in the
years
1980 and 1990,
this
had only approximately 5%.
Along with
that, K-12 education had
substantial
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a substantial
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place for each
year
at exactly a
quater
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quarter
and 18%, in
years
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the years
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2000 and 1980, respectively.
Additionally
, in 1990,
this
aspect had exactly
same
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the same
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proportion as health and human resources at one-fifth. The second one was approximately
same
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the same
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point
for the
years
1980 and 2000, with 14% and 10%.
Finally
, other aspects took
minimum
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a minimum
the minimum
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point
at around 5%, in the
years
1980
abd
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and
1990,
wereas
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whereas
it showed 1% in the
year
2000.
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