The map below show an industrial area in the tow of norbiton, and planned future development of the site
The maps illustrate the transformation of the industrial area in the town of Norbiton for now and
the
future. Change preposition
in the
Overall
, it is evident that the factories in the current situation will be replaced by residents in the future.
In terms of the features in the area, there will be new public areas such
as a school and playground on the east of the of
adjunction, Change preposition
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while
the adjunction will be surrounded by a shop and medical centre. The area also
will be covered with seven residential areas. Moreover
, the farmland on
the north will be cut into 50%.
Regarding the industrial roads, some improvements will be made in the future. Change preposition
in
First,
the small adjunction will be added on the south. Following
this
, the developers also
create new roads to the northwest from the centre straight to the housing and to the school on the east. Furthermore
, to
across the river, there will be a new bridge on the north side.Change preposition
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