The map below show an industrial area in the tow of norbiton, and planned future development of the site

The map below show an industrial area in the tow of norbiton, and planned future development of the site
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The maps illustrate the transformation of the industrial area in the town of Norbiton for now and
the
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future.
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, it is evident that the factories in the current situation will be replaced by residents in the future. In terms of the features in the area, there will be new public areas
such
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as a school and playground on the east of the
of
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adjunction,
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the adjunction will be surrounded by a shop and medical centre. The area
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will be covered with seven residential areas.
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, the farmland
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the north will be cut into 50%. Regarding the industrial roads, some improvements will be made in the future.
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the small adjunction will be added on the south.
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this
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, the developers
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create new roads to the northwest from the centre straight to the housing and to the school on the east.
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,
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across the river, there will be a new bridge on the north side.
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