The map below show an industrial area in the tow of norbiton, and planned future development of the site
The maps illustrate the transformation of the industrial area in the town of Norbiton for now and
the
future. Change preposition
in the
Overall
, it is evident that the factories in the current situation will be replaced by residents in the future.
In terms of the features in the area, there will be new public areas Linking Words
such
as a school and playground on the east of the Linking Words
of
adjunction, Change preposition
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while
the adjunction will be surrounded by a shop and medical centre. The area Linking Words
also
will be covered with seven residential areas. Linking Words
Moreover
, the farmland Linking Words
on
the north will be cut into 50%.
Regarding the industrial roads, some improvements will be made in the future. Change preposition
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First,
the small adjunction will be added on the south. Linking Words
Following
Linking Words
this
, the developers Linking Words
also
create new roads to the northwest from the centre straight to the housing and to the school on the east. Linking Words
Furthermore
, Linking Words
to
across the river, there will be a new bridge on the north side.Change preposition
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