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The table below shows the percentage of first year students who gave ‘very good’ rating to the resources provided by the college, for three courses.

The table below shows the percentage of first year students who gave ‘very good’ rating to the resources provided by the college, for three courses.
#percentage #first #year #students #‘very #good’ #resources #college #three #courses
The provided table indicates the number of students who
acheived
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achieved
 well grades in the three various courses of college in the first level of
university
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. A glance at the graph reveals that the highest percentage of getting
best
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 marks by
scholar
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scholars
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 was for teaching
Economics
 and
Commerce
 and
also
 Pre-course information for
Commerce
.
However
,learners did not reach
very
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 good rating in Pre-course information in
Economics
. The percentage of
first year
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 students who gave well level in teaching courses for
Economics
 was the same as teaching
Commerce
 at %95.(Which was the highest number of
grade
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grades
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 over the period).
Moreover
,the number of students who reached
best
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 marks in their tutor course for
Commerce
 was %93,just ahead of
tutor
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the tutor
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 course for
Economics
 at %90.
In contrast
,scholars did not get
very
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 good rate in their Pre-course information in
Economics
 at %59.(Which was the
least
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 percentage of level over the whole year).
In addition
,getting very good marks in Resources (print)
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learners in
Commerce
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 a bit as popular as
Economics
 at %85 and %81,respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words economics, commerce with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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