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The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Your report should comprise a minimum of 150 words

The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Your report should comprise a minimum of 150 words
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The chart provides information about the location and types of
dance
 classes which are attended by young
individuals
 in Australia.
Overall
, regarding location, most young people choose private studios as their
dance
 classes. Notably, ballet and modern are
two
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 most popular types of
dance
 for
under
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the under
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 11 and 11 to 16 age
group
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groups
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, respectively. Regarding
to
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the pie
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chart
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,
private
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the private
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 studio is the most popular location
that is
 chosen by young
individuals
,
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 for nearly
a
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half of the surveyed population. Followed by 24% who attend
dance
class
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classes
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 at school halls. There are 18% of the population choose community halls and
other
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others
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,
while
 only 10% prefer college-based studios. Moving on to the types of
dance
 classes,
it is clear that
 the number of young
individuals
 whose age under 11 choosing ballet
dance
 is around 600;
however
,
this
 type of
dance
are
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 not strongly preferred by the other groups. Particularly, only 300 young
individuals
 from 11 to 16 attend ballet
lesson
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.
In contrast
, a whopping 520 young participants from 11 to 16
choose
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 modern
dance
 compared to 300 in the remaining group.
Nevertheless
, tap
dance
 has a roughly equal number of attendants of both under 11 and 11 to 16 age groups, which are around 450 and 420, respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words dance, individuals with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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