The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.

This

map shows the plan for the town of

Garldson

which has a

population

of 65,000 citizens and,a new

supermarket

S is planned and there are 2 possible sites for the

supermarket

as well. It is obvious that possible S2 location is located in the town centre which has no traffic zones and

this

site is surrounded by a large space of industry.

Whereas

,S1 plans

is

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to be located in

countryside

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the countryside

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and near the main roads as well. S2 supermarkets may

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only one type of traffic which is a railway,and below there is a housing

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after crossing a small area of industry.Obviously, the location of the S2

supermarket

would be

setted

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closer for the majority of citizens in

Garldson

whereas

from S2 to 16 km to Brandson there are 15000

population

and

also

, from there to 25 km to Cransdon there are 29000

population

containing more than half of

Garldson

population

. S1

supermarket

may have 2 types of traffic which are main roads and railway as well.Naturally, there will be a small

population

nearby

due to

its location in the countryside.To be precise, there will be only

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population

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the town of

Garldson

which is

lesser

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than

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number of people surrounding the S2

supermarket

.