The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.
The given pie charts and table illustrate the data about the amount of money that
used
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was used
for
Change preposition
by
police
department and Add an article
the police
also
the sources between 2017 and 2018, in Britain.
Overall
, local
tax area was Correct article usage
the local
major
contributor Add an article
a major
the major
in
providing services in 2018.Change preposition
to
Additionally
, budget
was consumed only to enhance the utilities of technology.
The list of security finance has Add an article
the budget
significant
rise in Add an article
a significant
the
all sessions. In 2017, the state Remove the article
apply
about
176 Add a missing verb
was about
million
that
was changed Correct pronoun usage
apply
in
Change preposition
to
positive
figure of 179Add an article
the positive
a positive
m
in 2018. Correct your spelling
million
Next,
it can be seen in the question that tariff took part in proportion
of 91.2 Add an article
the proportion
a proportion
million
and then
it grow
more 21 Change the verb form
grows
million
rupees , which shown 102.3m in the latter year. Other source and total divisions have also
imparted cash that recorded
as 38,.5 Add a missing verb
was recorded
million
and 318.6m
in 2018, respectively.
Correct your spelling
million
On the other hand
, the percentage in construction
area was constant, it was 17% over the whole expenditures. Correct article usage
the construction
Whereas
, the remuneration has
dropped Unnecessary verb
apply
of
6% in 2018, which was 75% in Change preposition
by
previous
time. Correct article usage
the previous
In
Rephrase
Lastly
last
, the computer-base
system found only interesting assistance, it went up slightly less double that was only 8% in 2017.Correct your spelling
computer-based
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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