The diagram illustrates the Life Cycle process of frogs in a pond. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram below demonstrates the cycle
process
of Use synonyms
frogs
' life.
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Overall
, we can notice that Linking Words
this
Linking Words
process
starts from Use synonyms
eggs
and ends with becoming adult Use synonyms
frogs
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, Linking Words
this
cycle Linking Words
process
consists of 7 different steps.
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To begin
, Linking Words
it is clear that
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at the first stage
of Linking Words
this
Linking Words
process
, the Use synonyms
toads
release their Use synonyms
eggs
into the water ,and later Use synonyms
eggs
tend to turn into embryos. Use synonyms
Then
, the resulting embryos become tadpoles until the front legs appear on their body. Linking Words
In addition
, the next step shows that primary Linking Words
frogs
start pulmonary breathing at the 5th stage of the Use synonyms
process
in order to come out on land.
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Moreover
, until they become senior Linking Words
frogs
, Use synonyms
toads
come ashore and already become tadpole Use synonyms
frogs
, which can breathe above the water. After, we can realise that Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
process
repeats itself, starting with released Use synonyms
eggs
by mature Use synonyms
toads
and Use synonyms
finally
ending with turning these Linking Words
eggs
into adult Use synonyms
toads
.Use synonyms
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