The diagram illustrates the Life Cycle process of frogs in a pond. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram below demonstrates the cycle
process
of frogs
' life.
Overall
, we can notice that this
process
starts from eggs
and ends with becoming adult frogs
. Moreover
, this
cycle process
consists of 7 different steps.
To begin
, it is clear that
at the first stage
of this
process
, the toads
release their eggs
into the water ,and later eggs
tend to turn into embryos. Then
, the resulting embryos become tadpoles until the front legs appear on their body. In addition
, the next step shows that primary frogs
start pulmonary breathing at the 5th stage of the process
in order to come out on land.
Moreover
, until they become senior frogs
, toads
come ashore and already become tadpole frogs
, which can breathe above the water. After, we can realise that this
process
repeats itself, starting with released eggs
by mature toads
and finally
ending with turning these eggs
into adult toads
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