The charts compare the number of people per household* in the UK in 1981 and 2001.

The charts compare the number of people per household* in the UK in 1981 and 2001.
The provided chart gives information on the exact number of
individuals
per family in the UK in two different years, namely 1981 and 2001,
apart from
this
average household contains from one to six
personas
.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen, that the vast majority of
households
in the UK in both years consisted of one or two
individuals
. With regards to 1981, 31
families
consisted of 2
personas
,
while
17
households
included 1-
individuals
only.
However
,
families
in the UK which consisted of 3 or 4
individuals
remained relatively stable with 18 and 20.
Additionally
, 8
households
were extended with 5
personas
,
while
6
families
consisted of 6
personas
and were huge
families
in comparison with others.
On the other hand
, in 2001 the number of
families
with 1 and 2
personas
enhanced significantly to 26 and 34 respectively.
Moreover
, over the period of 20 years, the
households
with 3
personas
face an upward tendency and decline to 17. In 2001,
due to
some circumstances, the number of
individuals
hit the
bottommost
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point of 6, which included 6
personas
.
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