The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014
The provided line chart depicts the average fluctuation in the prices of Copper,
Nickel
and Use synonyms
Zinc
as compared to the previous month in 2014.
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Overall
, Linking Words
Nickel
started with the highest movement in the beginning, Use synonyms
whereas
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Zinc
experienced the opposite, Use synonyms
showed
the lowest changes in the initial month. Correct word choice
and showed
However
, there were fluctuations throughout the Linking Words
period
, making Use synonyms
Zinc
claimed as the most significant than Use synonyms
Nickel
used to.
In terms of Use synonyms
Nickel
, it Use synonyms
initially
depicted a 6% movement in January 2014, before it receding 5 months after consecutively, to just -3%. Linking Words
However
, it rose considerably by 2%, and remained fairly stable, hovering at -1% until September 2014. Even though it dropped to -2% a month after, Linking Words
Nickel
illustrated a notable increase in NovemberUse synonyms
,
and stood at the same until the end of the Remove the comma
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period
, which was 1%, sitting as the least movement.
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In contrast
, Linking Words
Zinc
started with the lowest changes in January, among other metals, which was 1%, hitting its peak in February, 3%. Use synonyms
Nonetheless
, the figure showed a downline trend until June 2014, before increasing by approximately a half per cent during 3 Linking Words
months
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3-month
period
. Use synonyms
Zinc
experienced the second drop in October, but moved to the highest changes Use synonyms
at the end
of the Linking Words
period
.Use synonyms
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