Nowadays people use bicycles less as a form of transport. Why is this the case? What can we do to encourage people to use bicycles more? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.
In the early days,
people
used to use
bicycles
from their homes to their workplaces and supermarkets.These days transport methods have changed abruptly due to
the advancement of technology and people
travel long distances
to reach their workplaces.There are many options that can be adopted to motivate everyone to use
bicycles
such
as providing jobs in local areas and building separate cycle pathways to avoid accidents.
Certainly, there are many ways to encourage people
to drive bicycles
. The main important reason is the Authorities must provide jobs in their local areas so people
can work
locally and do not need to commute long distances
for work
. For example
, in Sydney, due to
the advancement of technology people
work
far from their homes because they do not have suitable jobs near their regions, so people
use
private vehicles and public transport to work
in these companies. Another reason is separate pathways, these days the population has been increasing and more chances to meet with an accident, so people
avoid using bicycles
and many sites have no designated parking space.
There are many steps that can be taken by the Authorities so people
can use
bicycles
. Firstly
, encourage society about the future dangers of using fossil fuels. For instance
, residents of Sydney use
cars even for short distances
due to
the lack of awareness about environmental pollution. Secondly
, provide special parking spaces on trains, so people
can carry their bicycles
with them. In addition
, the States must provide vouchers to motivate them to use
bicycles
.
In conclusion, due to
their job commitments, people
have to travel far distances
and need to use
other transport methods to reach their destinations. However
, if motivate the public and teach them about pollution and upcoming disasters, they will definitely use
cycles.Submitted by rbtech65 on
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