The chart below shows what anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.
The pie chart beneath provides detailed data about the occupation of anthropology bachelor's students from the University. The table demonstrates the earnings of the alumni of human sciences in five years' time.
Overall
, it can be observed that just over a
half of Correct article usage
apply
total
number of graduates are capable Change the article
a total
the total
to be
successfully hired by employers for full-time jobs, meanwhile, Change preposition
of being
other
half Correct article usage
the other
occupies
themselves with postgraduate education and part-time Correct subject-verb agreement
occupy
works
. Regarding Fix the agreement mistake
work
to
the given table, a significant part of ex-students Remove the preposition
apply
earns
an adequate amount of money.
Taken together, the predominant youth gain permanent employment, reflecting over Correct subject-verb agreement
earn
a
half of Correct article usage
apply
entire
portion. Correct article usage
the entire
In contrast
, a small minority are those, who opt for the deeper investigation of their fields. According to
data, some of the alumni balance their work and study, as well as
those, who make wages from temporary positions, showing 5% and 15% respectively.
On closer examination in
salaries, the state employees are able to obtain the highest salaries in their occupations, acquiring more than $100 000 every second employee and, the least paycheques between $25 000 and $49 000 are earned by only 5%. Followingly, freelancers and private companies' employees may acquire roughly similar earnings, Change preposition
of
from
10% of people, earning less than $50 000 and a third of former students, earning more than $100 000.Change preposition
with
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