The graph below gives information about the number of tourists who visited five different countries between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates information regarding the
number
of tourists
who visited five different countries
from 1995 to 2010.
Overall
, the majority of the people visited the USA
throughout the years while
Brazil has the least number
of people visiting their country. All the
five Correct article usage
apply
countries
except the USA
experienced an increase in the amount of visitors who travelled to their countries
from 1995 to 2010.
Firstly
, the number
of travellers who went to the USA
rose from 70 million
in 1995 to 90 million
in 2005. However
, it suffered a slight decrease in the number
of tourists
which resulted in 85 million
tourists
who came to the USA
in 2010. In comparison, in France, the international tourists
arrivals rose dramatically from 30 Change the noun form
tourist
million
in 1995 to 85 million
in 2010, reaching the same level in the same year as the USA
.
Moreover
, countries
like Malaysia, Egypt and Brazil faced a gradual increase between 1995 and 2010. But among these three countries
, Malaysia has the greatest number
of people visiting their country, peaking at the number
of 45 million
in 2010.Submitted by cherrychan926 on
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