The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.
The visual
represantation
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representation
delinates
how is produced Correct your spelling
delineates
electricity
in a Use synonyms
hydroelectricic
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hydroelectric
power
station. The visual shows that Use synonyms
production
of Correct article usage
the production
electricity
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in
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apply
differ
from day and night.
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differs
Overall
, there are several steps to generate Linking Words
electricity
with Use synonyms
water
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Firstly
, Linking Words
river's
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the river's
water
is Use synonyms
fulled
in a dam which is Correct your spelling
filled
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a high
the high
high
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high-level
level
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reservoir
. Use synonyms
Dam's
gate is opened Correct article usage
The dam's
in
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during
day
and closed Add an article
the day
in
during the night time. The river's Change preposition
apply
water
is flowed into the Use synonyms
power
station to produce Use synonyms
electricity
with a pipe. Use synonyms
Water
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reach
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reaches
to
the Change preposition
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power
station and Use synonyms
generator
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the generator
produce
energy by reversible turbines. Produced energy is transferred to Change the verb form
produces
national
grid via Add an article
the national
power
lines.
During the night time, Use synonyms
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the low
a low
low
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low-level
level
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reservoir
is Use synonyms
fulled
with Correct your spelling
filled
a
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apply
water
and reversible turbines Use synonyms
is
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apply
pump
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a pump
the pump
to
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apply
water
into Use synonyms
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the high
a high
high
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high-level
level
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reservoir
. Use synonyms
Water
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pass
through to pipe and Change the verb form
passes
finally
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is reached
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reaches
to
the Change preposition
apply
high
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high-level
level
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reservoir
.Use synonyms
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