the chart below shows the number of trips made by children in one country in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school using different mode of transport. summarize the information and make a comparison. write at least 150 words.
The bar chart provides key information about the count of journeys made by children in a world region by using different means of transportation to go to school, in 1990 and 2010, with units measured in millions.
Overall
, it can be seen that walking accounted for the largest number of trips
, in 1990. In addition
, in 2010 the use of car passengers rose, whereas
walking decreased.
According to
what is shown, in 1990 walking constituted the majority of trips
, at about 12, while
car passengers represented the minority, at approximately 4. In addition
, buses witnessed a relatively modest number of trips
nearly 6.4, which was slightly higher than cycling, at about 6.1.
In terms of 2010 trips
, car passengers saw a rapid increase to more than 10, in contrast
walking reduced by nearly half to around 6. Despite the use of cycling, walking and bus, and buses declined, buses still accounted for more trips
than cycling and walking, at about 4.4.Submitted by sm710129 on
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