The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a paritcular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph displays how many tourists came to a specific Caribbean
island
from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
,while
at the beginning of the recorded period, more visitors
were staying on the island
, at the end
more, visitors
were staying on cruise ships. The total visitor numbers increased gradually during the time span.
Although
the number
of visitors
staying on the island
was more than 0.5 million
, which was higher by nearly 0.5 million
than the number
of cruise ships staying visitors
, they finished the recorded time with nearly half a million
less than them. The number
of visitors
staying on cruise ships fluctuated mildly between nearly 0.25 million
and almost 0.5 million
from 2010 to 2012, and then
this
figure increased significantly from nearly 0.5 million
to exactly 2 million
in 2017, just after passing staying
Verb problem
apply
island
visitors
in 2015.
The number
of total island
visitors
rose dramatically from 1 million
in 2010 to just over 2.5 million
in 2015. After that, the trend remained stable at around 2.5 till 2015, and then
it increased sharply to just over 3.5 million
at the end
of the time span.Submitted by
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Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
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