The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a paritcular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a paritcular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph displays how many tourists came to a specific Caribbean
island
from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
,
while
at the beginning of the recorded period, more
visitors
were staying on the
island
,
at the end
more,
visitors
were staying on cruise ships. The total visitor numbers increased gradually during the time span.
Although
the
number
of
visitors
staying on the
island
was more than 0.5
million
, which was higher by nearly 0.5
million
than the
number
of cruise ships staying
visitors
, they finished the recorded time with nearly half a
million
less than them. The
number
of
visitors
staying on cruise ships fluctuated mildly between nearly 0.25
million
and almost 0.5
million
from 2010 to 2012, and
then
this
figure increased significantly from nearly 0.5
million
to exactly 2
million
in 2017, just after passing
staying
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island
visitors
in 2015. The
number
of total
island
visitors
rose dramatically from 1
million
in 2010 to just over 2.5
million
in 2015. After that, the trend remained stable at around 2.5 till 2015, and
then
it increased sharply to just over 3.5
million
at the end
of the time span.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
Vocabulary: Replace the words island, visitors, number, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • upward trend
  • steady increase
  • peak
  • stabilization
  • notable change
  • market saturation
  • seasonal variations
  • tourism infrastructure
  • external factors
  • global economic conditions
  • persistent popularity
  • demand patterns
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