The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a paritcular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph displays how many tourists came to a specific Caribbean
island
from 2010 to 2017.
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Overall
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while
at the beginning of the recorded period, more Linking Words
visitors
were staying on the Use synonyms
island
, Use synonyms
at the end
more, Linking Words
visitors
were staying on cruise ships. The total visitor numbers increased gradually during the time span.
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Although
the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
staying on the Use synonyms
island
was more than 0.5 Use synonyms
million
, which was higher by nearly 0.5 Use synonyms
million
than the Use synonyms
number
of cruise ships staying Use synonyms
visitors
, they finished the recorded time with nearly half a Use synonyms
million
less than them. The Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
staying on cruise ships fluctuated mildly between nearly 0.25 Use synonyms
million
and almost 0.5 Use synonyms
million
from 2010 to 2012, and Use synonyms
then
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this
figure increased significantly from nearly 0.5 Linking Words
million
to exactly 2 Use synonyms
million
in 2017, just after passing Use synonyms
staying
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apply
island
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visitors
in 2015.
The Use synonyms
number
of total Use synonyms
island
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visitors
rose dramatically from 1 Use synonyms
million
in 2010 to just over 2.5 Use synonyms
million
in 2015. After that, the trend remained stable at around 2.5 till 2015, and Use synonyms
then
it increased sharply to just over 3.5 Linking Words
million
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at the end
of the time span.Linking Words
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island, visitors, number, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
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