The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a paritcular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a paritcular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph displays how many tourists came to a specific Caribbean
island
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from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
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,
while
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at the beginning of the recorded period, more
visitors
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were staying on the
island
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,
at the end
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more,
visitors
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were staying on cruise ships. The total visitor numbers increased gradually during the time span.
Although
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the
number
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of
visitors
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staying on the
island
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was more than 0.5
million
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, which was higher by nearly 0.5
million
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than the
number
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of cruise ships staying
visitors
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, they finished the recorded time with nearly half a
million
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less than them. The
number
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of
visitors
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staying on cruise ships fluctuated mildly between nearly 0.25
million
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and almost 0.5
million
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from 2010 to 2012, and
then
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this
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figure increased significantly from nearly 0.5
million
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to exactly 2
million
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in 2017, just after passing
staying
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island
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visitors
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in 2015. The
number
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of total
island
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visitors
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rose dramatically from 1
million
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in 2010 to just over 2.5
million
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in 2015. After that, the trend remained stable at around 2.5 till 2015, and
then
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it increased sharply to just over 3.5
million
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at the end
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of the time span.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
Vocabulary: Replace the words island, visitors, number, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • upward trend
  • steady increase
  • peak
  • stabilization
  • notable change
  • market saturation
  • seasonal variations
  • tourism infrastructure
  • external factors
  • global economic conditions
  • persistent popularity
  • demand patterns
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