The pie chart shows the percentage of car ownership by make in three countries in 2015. Summarize the information by select and report the main features, make comparison where relevant.
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pie chart illustrates the proportion of automobile production in seven developed nations in 2015.
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Overall
, Greater China was a top manufacture
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the car
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cars
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Europe fell a close Correct article usage
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North America accounted for less than a fifth Correct article usage
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the car
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cars
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Africa
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America and Asia both have less than one in ten Correct your spelling
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