The graph illustrates how crime rates altered in Panama City during the period 2010-2019. We can see immediately that the greatest change occurred in the number of burglaries, while incidents of theft remained low but steady.
The line chart illustrates the number of incidents of three
type
Fix the agreement mistake
types
serious
felonies in Panama Change preposition
of serious
town
from 2010 until 2019.
Capitalize word
Town
Overall
, crimes such
as burglary and car theft had significantly decline
over the recorded period, especially burglary Wrong verb form
declined
whereas
robbery has
a Wrong verb form
had
vary
trend until the end of the year with the lowest misdeed digit in comparison to other Change the verb form
varying
misdemeanous
.
Looking at the top two illegal acts, Correct your spelling
misdemeanours
misdemeanour
the
initial year, burglary was the number one top violation with figures of 3400 incidents. Change preposition
in the
However
, in 2011, it had decreased sharply and reached at
the lowest point of 1000 cases in 2015 before fluctuating for 4 years with 1300 rates. Change preposition
apply
Next,
theft fell a close second,
accounting for 2800 incidents. Over the 9 years
period, it stood at a slightly lower than Correct your spelling
9-year
previous
amount, 2700 cases.
Regarding robbery, it had the least incident compared to Change the article
the previous
other
two where in 2010, 650 criminals Correct article usage
the other
have
broke the laws Unnecessary verb
apply
then
it had fluctuating
trend throughout the mentioned years, at which point ended at the same Correct article usage
a fluctuating
numeral
in 2019.Replace the word
number
Submitted by tifjong on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "illustrates" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
▼
Ultimate Speaking practice for IELTS
Practice speaking step by step, answer real-life questions, and build your confidence. Start your free trial and improve your speaking skills today!