The diagram illustrates how bees produce honey. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graphic is showing us information about the production of
honey
by the bees
.
Overall
, the production of honey
consists in
7 steps, starting with the construction of the bee’s nest and finishing with the Change preposition
of
honey
in a jar after the collection.
The first step consists in
building the hives that have octagonal structures called Change preposition
of
cells
. Them
, the Correct your spelling
Then
bees
leave the hives and fly in order to found
flowers to pollinate. When the Wrong verb form
find
bees
finally
find a suitable flower, they extract their nectar. After that, the bees
bring the nectar back to the cells
in the hives. Once the bees
have filled all the cells
with nectar from the flowers, they start to flap their wings in order to produce air flow
beginning, in that way the evaporation of water. When the water is totally evaporated, the Correct your spelling
airflow
honey
in the cells
is ready to collect and can be put in jars for human Correct your spelling
consumption
consuption
Correct your spelling
consumption
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