The chart below shows what anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. 1

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fully employed.Meanwhile,

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categories are about

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.And a table shows a salary improvement in all three professions in five years.

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the number of full-time

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workers

was less than a fifth. After, several unemployed created 12%.

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.Interestingly,

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part time

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workers

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a small minority. The table shows the results of graduates after a few years.There are

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three main types of employment. In the first time, their wages fell.

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, the freelance consultants and government sector showed the lowest result (5-15% )with salaries of $25,000-49,999. There has been an

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salary in the government sector,which created half

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and the income was $100,000.

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, private companies afford average indicators near 10-30% with good earnings.