when we meet someone for the firt time , we generally decide very quickly what kind of person we think they are and if we like them or not. is this a good thing or a bad thing?

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • first impression
  • snap judgment
  • initial assessment
  • cultural norms
  • biases
  • preconceived notions
  • gut feeling
  • interaction
  • social cues
  • rapport
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