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Writing Samples
Band 8

You have seen an advertisement for a weekend course to study a foreign language. Write a letter to the institution offering the course. In your letter: ask for details of the course ask if the course teachers are qualified native speakers request that the institution sends you their brochure. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir / Madam,... Write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am interested in enrolling in the French
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 weekend course advertised in the newspaper. I am planning to migrate to Canada and I came to know that Canada has many French speakers and learning the
language
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 would be beneficial for my adjustment there. I am currently at A1 level and I would like to improve myself to achieve my dream. It would be great if you provide more information on
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 course
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 as the various levels available, duration, fees, and mode of study ie, online or in-person. My requirement is to clear the B2 level, so if you could send me the details of
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 level, it would be helpful.
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, I am interested to understand the qualifications of the faculty available at the institute. Can you please advise if they are native speakers of the
language
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 the years of experience in teaching
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language
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? Would you kindly send the brochure so that I can verify if the course meets my requirements
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 Thanks for your co-operation. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Sherin Mathew

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coherence cohesion
Include a specific topic sentence in each paragraph to improve clarity and focus.
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Slightly fewer details about your background would keep the letter more concise and focused on the request.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriately formal and polite.
task achievement
The letter provides a complete and clear response to all parts of the task prompt.
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The writing tone is suitable and professionally courteous.
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