The bar chart below shows the amount of money invested in each categories from five organisations in 2015. Summarise the information bu selecting and reporting the main features, and make conparison where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the data
of
investment in 4 different classifications from 5 Change preposition
on
campanies
in 2015. The unit given is billion Correct your spelling
companies
Euros
.
Overall
, organisation B has spent more money in all categories, mainly on the building whereas
firm D has accumulated the lowest investment number in 2015.
Looking at the top three higher funding establishment
, company B has the significantly higher proportion in Fix the agreement mistake
establishments
Add an article
a fund
the fund
fund
with Fix the agreement mistake
funds
sum
Correct article usage
a sum
up
of 6.1 Change preposition
apply
million
Euros
, especially the building with 1.7 million
Euros
then
reseach
around 1.6 Correct your spelling
research
million
Euros
while
on the staff training at 1.5 million
Euros
, and lastly
from B is the maachinery
accounted for 1.3 Correct your spelling
machinery
million
Euros
. Coperation
A fell a close Correct your spelling
Corporation
second,
with total
number of 3.1 Change the article
a total
the total
miilion
Correct your spelling
million
Euros
. Organisation C placed third place with entire
share at 2.3 Correct article usage
the entire
million
Euros
.
Regarding the lowest money allocation leading
by company D with combined figures of all categories stood at 1.55 Wrong verb form
led
million
Euros
where the research has
the least favoured, accounting for 0.3 billion Verb problem
was
Euros
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