The chart below shows what anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. 3

The diagram below illustrates what Anthropology graduates did after ending the same undergraduate course of degree.The table demonstrates the anthropologists’ salary improvement after 5

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work

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.

Overall

, It is a

pie-chart

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which shows the destination of Anthropology graduates in percentages.Approximately the

pie-chart

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is divided into 6 parts.The full-time workers

takes

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more

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up more

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than half of the whole chart,

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while

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the rest parts take up less.

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, The table presents the salary improvement in 5

years

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time.The greatest rise was in the

last

year

.When

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half of the workers got more than one hundred thousand dollars

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in employment

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with, all

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6 pieces

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nearly had

thier

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their

job or continued studying,except the one portion.The

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section takes less than a fifth of the draw, and it is unknown could they find their work or not.

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the scheme,during the 5

year

time

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employees had definite employments which had differences in amount each

year

.But it was concluded with a valuable increase in

last

one

year

.What changes the whole rest fractions

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