The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided maps illustrate the changes in the
road
access to City Hospital in the years 2007 and 2010.
Overall
, there were significant alterations in the layout design of the hospital surroundings. Notably, additional features such
as a bus stop, roundabout, and car parks were introduced in the 2010 map.
In 2007, the hospital was encircled by a ring road
. However
, in 2010, a public car park emerged to the east of the ring road
. Furthermore
, the road
leading to the hospital was directly linked to both the ring road
and the city road
in 2007. In contrast
, in 2010, two roundabouts were installed to the south of the hospital, connecting the ring road
and city road
. Additionally
, significant changes in the distribution of facilities occurred between the two years, including the relocation of the bus stop and the separation of the bus station to the western side of the hospital road
.
Moreover
, in 2010, the staff car park was relocated to the eastern side of the road
, depicting a complete transformation of the hospital’s access and surrounding facilities.Submitted by bb_emperator on
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