The chart below shows what anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. 4

The chart below shows what anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. 4
The chart illustrates what Anthropology completers from the same college did once they ended their undergraduate studies. The table displays the earnings of the anthropologists working after five years.
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, the first one is a pie chart which consists of
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6 categories that are measured in percentage. The vast majority of Anthropology graduates are fully employed meanwhile, all other categories are about the same. The table presents salary improvements in all 3 professions in 5
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time. It is obvious that the most of degree holders are now working
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full-time, employed ones form
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52% on the chart. And the other largest sections are
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and unemployment which are almost the same. And 8% are unknown
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and postgraduate study. The table shows the salaries of Anthropology graduates after five years, categorized by the type of employment. Freelance consultants and those in private companies appear to have the highest earning potential, with 40% and 30%, respectively, earning over $100,000 annually.
In contrast
, government sector jobs offer lower salaries, with 50% of graduates earning between $50,000 and $74,999, and only 30% earning $100,000 or more.
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