In some countries, prison is seen as the solution to crime. However, some people believe that giving people a better education is a better way to prevent them from committing crimes. To what extent do you agree or disagree with these ideas? Give your opinions based on your knowledge and expeiences.

There is no doubt that other nations still practice jail time to solve felonies.

However

, it is debated among the people that they should provide

education

to reduce

violation

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. I totally agree that

education

as

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prevention to

avoid

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them

on

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from

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committing

misdeer

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misdeed

.

To begin

with, looking at the

education's

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education

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perspective, it helps in shaping the

behavior

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behaviour

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and attitudes of individuals. When they

have

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exposed to

such

awareness about misdemeanours and victimization,

making

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them

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less

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are less

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likely to commit crimes.

For instance

, starting

in

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at

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a young age, encourage them to develop

sense

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a sense

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of

moral

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and empathy

on

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humanity.

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,

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education

provides

long-term

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a long-term

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solution compared to prison.

Education

addresses the root causes of crime

whereas

prison only

deter

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deters

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offence in a short-term solution.

For example

,

former

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the former

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inmate will probably

commits

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an illegal act owing to a lack of knowledge and support.

On the other hand

, no one can deny that the detention centre can help mitigate the transgression rates. When

the

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criminal

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criminals

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broke

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the laws

and

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apply

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they will be sent to

lock-up

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.

As a result

,

this

approach to crime reduction.

Furthermore

, many ex-offender will learn from their mistake and experiences

while

staying in the correction

center

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centre

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. Giving an example,

ex-convict

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an ex-convict

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who

is being release

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from jail will think twice before doing something bad.

Consequently

, providing an effective way

on

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of

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reducing

such

wrongful events. In conclusion, I think that prevention is better than cure.

Likewise

,

education

is the better method to prevent them from committing crimes, considering the moral value and long-term effect.

Therefore

, I agree

with

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education

is more important rather than prison.