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The chart below shows the internet users (in millions) in different countries in the Middle East as of June 2017. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Internet users in million - June 2017

The chart below shows the internet users (in millions) in different countries in the Middle East as of June 2017. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Internet users in million - June 2017
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The bar chart illustrates the
number
 of
internet
users
 found in the Middle East countries in June 2017. The most
internet
 user was found in
Iran
 because there were approximately 56,7
million
 people who accessed the
internet
 in June 2017.
This
number
 shows that the
internet
 was very popular in
Iran
this
 month;
nevertheless
, there are only about 24,15
million
 people were using the
internet
 in Saudi Arabia which
put
Wrong verb form
puts
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 them in the second position after
Iran
. Iraq was the third biggest
internet
 user with 14
million
internet
users
.
On the other hand
, Lebanon had the smallest
number
 of
internet
users
 compared to other countries which is approximately there were only 4,6
million
internet
users
 located in
this
 country. Syria, Jordan, and Israel had a similar
number
 of
internet
users
 if they compared them together;
nonetheless
, their
internet
users
 were bigger than Lebanon’s. There were slightly above 6
million
internet
users
 in Syria, 6,3
million
 in Jordan and about 6,7
million
 in Israel. In conclusion, the most
internet
users
 in June 2017 were found in
Iran
 compared to other Middle East countries.
On the contrary
, the smallest amount of
internet
users
 happened in Lebanon;
therefore
, it was in the latest position.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, internet, users, iran, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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