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The chart below shows the internet users (in millions) in different countries in the Middle East as of June 2017. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should Internet users in million - June 2017

The chart below shows the internet users (in millions) in different countries in the Middle East as of June 2017. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should Internet users in million - June 2017
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The bar chart illustrates the
number
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 of
internet
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users
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 found in the Middle East countries in June 2017. The most
internet
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 user was found in
Iran
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 because there were approximately 56,7
million
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 people who accessed the
internet
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 in June 2017.
This
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number
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 shows that the
internet
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 was very popular in
Iran
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this
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 month;
nevertheless
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, there are only about 24,15
million
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 people were using the
internet
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 in Saudi Arabia which
put
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 them in the second position after
Iran
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. Iraq was the third biggest
internet
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 user with 14
million
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internet
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users
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.
On the other hand
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, Lebanon had the smallest
number
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 of
internet
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users
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 compared to other countries which is approximately there were only 4,6
million
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internet
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users
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 located in
this
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 country. Syria, Jordan, and Israel had a similar
number
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 of
internet
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users
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 if they compared them together;
nonetheless
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, their
internet
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users
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 were bigger than Lebanon’s. There were slightly above 6
million
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internet
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users
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 in Syria, 6,3
million
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 in Jordan and about 6,7
million
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 in Israel. In conclusion, the most
internet
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users
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 in June 2017 were found in
Iran
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 compared to other Middle East countries.
On the contrary
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, the smallest amount of
internet
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users
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 happened in Lebanon;
therefore
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, it was in the latest position.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, internet, users, iran, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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