The diagram below shows the different steps to make a simple ice cream recipe at home.
The diagram below shows the 6 steps about how to cook a simple
ice
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cream
at home. Use synonyms
Overall
, the 6 steps are preparation, pasteurisation, ageing, freezing, adding extras and hardening.
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Firstly
, we Linking Words
prepare gathering
Wrong verb form
gathered
ingredients
and some water, some Use synonyms
cup
of juice and milk in the bowl by utensil. The second Fix the agreement mistake
cups
step
is pasteurisation. In Use synonyms
this
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step
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while
we set fire to a building, we Linking Words
are mixing
some milk, sugar and Wrong verb form
mix
ingredients
. Use synonyms
Next,
the third Linking Words
step
is ageing, Use synonyms
which
the Change preposition
in which
ingredients
are refrigerated in Use synonyms
ice
.
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In addition
, after these 3 steps, the fourth Linking Words
step
is freezing. Use synonyms
Ingredients
are cooled in Use synonyms
refrigerator
. Add an article
the refrigerator
a refrigerator
In addition
, the 5th Linking Words
step
is adding Use synonyms
extras
flavour. Change the noun form
extra
Finally
, the 6th Linking Words
step
is Use synonyms
that
hardening. For the final Correct determiner usage
apply
step
of hardening the Use synonyms
ice
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cream
, pour the Use synonyms
ice
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cream
mix into a dish with the lid on, Use synonyms
then
chill in the refrigerator for around 10 minutes to harden the Linking Words
ice
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cream
.Use synonyms
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