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The graph below shows the population of foxes on four diffeent Californian islands between 1994 and 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The graph below shows the population of foxes on four diffeent Californian islands between 1994 and 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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the illustrated line diagram represents the population of
foxes
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 in four
californian
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Californian
California
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islands
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 listed
Santa
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Catalina
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,
Santa
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 Cruz,
Santa
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 Rosa and
San
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 Miguel between 1994 and 2004.
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 with,
Santa
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Catalina
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 and
Santa
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 Cruz
data
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 represents
a
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apply
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interwined
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intertwined
data
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 over the years which started at 1333
foxes
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 and around 1500
foxes
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 in 1994 respectively,
this
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count
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 steeply fell down to just over 200
foxes
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 in
Santa
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Catalina
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 and above 666
foxes
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 in 1998.
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 declining trend ended in 2000 with both
island
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islands
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 reaching fell down leaving only 15
foxes
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 in total
in
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on
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 each
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islands
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island
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. For
Santa
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Catalina
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Catalina,
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this
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count
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 rose to 333
foxes
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 with sudden growth
while
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Santa
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the Santa
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 Cruz fox
count
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observed
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was observed
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with
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a slow gradual rise at 51
foxes
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.
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,
this
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 pattern broke with
the
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both
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islands
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island's
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foxes
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count
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 climbing up to 1666 by 2014
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, the
data
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 representing
Santa
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 Rosa and
San
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 Miguel
observed
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were observed
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 to have an initial
count
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 of 1780 and above 333
foxes
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 in 1994 respectively.
This
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count
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 later lapsed down to only 15
foxes
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 and marginally above 15
foxes
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 in both
islands
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.
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Although
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However
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this
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 pattern later improved with a
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foxes
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fox
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count
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 rising to 333
foxes
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 in
Santa
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Catalina
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 and 51
foxes
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 in
San
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 Miguel.
This
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data
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 improvement continued with
foxes
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count
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 jumping to 1666
in
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on
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 each island by 2014.
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, all
island
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islands
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 suffered a great loss in
foxes
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with
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which
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 along the years improved and reached back near to their initial
count
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 by 2014 except
San
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 Rosa which was only able to reach
one third
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one-third
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 of their initial
count
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.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words foxes, islands, santa, catalina, san, data, count with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "represents" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "improved" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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