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The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts below illustrate the proportion of methods of gaining the
news
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 in
Canada
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 and
Australia
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.
Overall
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it is clear that
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 getting
news
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 online is the most significant way in
Australia
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,
whereas
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 the TV method of accessing the
news
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 has a huge percentage in
Canada
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.
To begin
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, we can notice that the primary approach to taking the
news
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 in
Canada
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 is using TV consisting of 40%,
by contrast
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, in
Australia
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, people mostly get their
news
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 from online platforms 52%, which is more than half of the whole pie chart.
Moreover
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, the second usual way to gain
the
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news
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 in
Canada
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 is through online facilities at 36%, and in
Australia
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, approximately
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the same result citizens take the
news
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 from TV programmes at 37%. Regarding the other methods,
Australia
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 shows that printed and radio
news
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 take up only 7% and 2% among the whole ways, respectively.
While
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 the proportion of getting the
news
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 by listening to the radio is 7% and by searching prints is 14% among Canadian individuals.
In addition
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, only 2% and 3% are related to not specified methods of accessing the
news
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 in respectively
Australia
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 and
Canada
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words news, canada, australia with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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