The graphs below show the development of Brindell from 1800 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graphs illustrate the development area of
Brindell
between 1800 and 2000. Overall
, there were 2 things as the most noticeable transformation of infrastructure construction for the past 2 centuries, such
as the building of a factory and Bun
Hill
village
for staff.
According to
the pictures, in the initial period, there are several parts of Brindell
, such
as farmland
(crops and animals
), river stour, and Brindell
. The farmland
animals
is
located in the right part of Change the verb form
are
Brindell
, where woodland is opposite Farm Land. In the middle of the Farmland
and animals
and woodland, there is river stour and goes to the northern as the neighbour of woodland, there was
Wrong verb form
is
farmland
crop.
Furthermore
, in 1900 and 2000, there had been some changes because of the infrastructure building. After being smaller in 1900, the woodland had been
separated again to build Wrong verb form
was
Bun
Hill
Park, whereas
in
1900, the Add the comma(s)
, in
farmland
animals
transformed to be industry and Bun
Hill
village
for workers with separated areas. Afterwards, a century later village
for workers was getting larger and Bun
Hill
Park became the village
for workers. Finally
, the Brindell
, farmland
crops, and river stour had not had any significant changes.Submitted by pratiwi.fadhilah11 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words brindell, bun, hill, village, farmland, animals with synonyms.
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