The graphs below show the development of Brindell from 1800 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graphs illustrate the development area of
Brindell
between 1800 and 2000. Use synonyms
Overall
, there were 2 things as the most noticeable transformation of infrastructure construction for the past 2 centuries, Linking Words
such
as the building of a factory and Linking Words
Bun
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Hill
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village
for staff.
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According to
the pictures, in the initial period, there are several parts of Linking Words
Brindell
, Use synonyms
such
as Linking Words
farmland
(crops and Use synonyms
animals
), river stour, and Use synonyms
Brindell
. The Use synonyms
farmland
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animals
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is
located in the right part of Change the verb form
are
Brindell
, where woodland is opposite Farm Land. In the middle of the Use synonyms
Farmland
and Use synonyms
animals
and woodland, there is river stour and goes to the northern as the neighbour of woodland, there Use synonyms
was
Wrong verb form
is
farmland
crop.
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Furthermore
, in 1900 and 2000, there had been some changes because of the infrastructure building. After being smaller in 1900, the woodland Linking Words
had been
separated again to build Wrong verb form
was
Bun
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Hill
Park, Use synonyms
whereas
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in
1900, the Add the comma(s)
, in
farmland
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animals
transformed to be industry and Use synonyms
Bun
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Hill
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village
for workers with separated areas. Afterwards, a century later Use synonyms
village
for workers was getting larger and Use synonyms
Bun
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Hill
Park became the Use synonyms
village
for workers. Use synonyms
Finally
, the Linking Words
Brindell
, Use synonyms
farmland
crops, and river stour had not had any significant changes.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such".
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words brindell, bun, hill, village, farmland, animals with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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