Topic: The tables and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the chart shows how it was distributed.
The provided table and pie charts
represents
the data about Change the verb form
represent
police
Correct article usage
the police
budget
between 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain.
Overall
, as it
can be seen the total Correct pronoun usage
apply
budget
and its
every Correct pronoun usage
apply
sources
increased in 2018 compared to 2017, Change to a singular noun
source
however
, it must be notice
that in 2018 the whole spending which was for salary of police Correct your spelling
noted
had
decreased significantly Unnecessary verb
apply
while
technologies had
slightly Verb problem
apply
increase
when buildings and transport remained stable.
Police Wrong verb form
increased
budget
had grown gradially
, from 304.7m to 318.6m Correct your spelling
gradually
overall
, while
it
Correct pronoun usage
its
sources
also
changed, respectively. For instance
, National
Government showed Correct article usage
the National
minimally
growth to 177.8m from 175.5m. Change the adverb
minimal
Whereas
, other sources
jumped to only half of million
, from 38m to 38.5m. Correct article usage
a million
Nevertheless
, it mus
to Correct your spelling
must
notice
local taxes considerably rocketed compared to Verb problem
noted
National
Government and other Correct article usage
the National
sources
, climbing from just more than 90m to sligthly
more than 100m.
The spending of the Correct your spelling
slightly
budget
changed dramatically at that time. Salaries that had 3 quarters of all total spending, declined for just less than 70% in 2018. Moreover
, technologies Correct your spelling
risen
rised
for 75% of its own, from 8% to 14%, Correct your spelling
rose
however
the budget
for buildings and transport stagnatedSubmitted by talgattan4ez on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, overall, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words budget, sources, m with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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