The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit , during the same two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant.

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visitors

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to

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during the

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before and after

refurbishment

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.

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, the charts show the

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of surveys asking

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visitors

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satisfaction .

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, the

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of

visitors

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to

Ashdown

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museum

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are

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increased

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dramatically

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year

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before to the

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after

refurbishment

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.

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visitors

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satisfication

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satisfaction

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of

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who are very

statisfied

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increased sharply ,

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who are dissatisfied

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sharply,

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visitors

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number of visitors

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sharply in the same period of time. It can be seen from the table down that the

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of

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rose from 74.000 to 92.000 during the

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before and after the

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the charts below which show the results of surveys of visitor satisfaction. The

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of people who are very satisfied rose

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from 15 to 35 in the

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after. There was

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a steep rise

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who

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from around 30

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visitors

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the year

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of

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to around 40

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in the after of

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. So these are showing similar trend from The charts.

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of

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visitors

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who are dissatisfied

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museum

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sharply from 40 to 15 during the period given.

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, the amount of

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people who are very dissatisfied

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levelled out before plummeting to a low of 15. One notable point is that the

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of

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who were not given any response

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before and after

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had

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(5).